You should have these published they are great.
swtbreezie
Awesome poety, straight talk and from the heart. I love the second one, it expresses exactly how I feel about the "dragon". Thanks for posting and I just wanted you to know it did help me, and I see there are several others who agree.
Peace.
just wanted to say I'm in day 4 of withdrawl and I have been coming here daily to read those poems...they inspire me to stay strong..and I just wanted to say thank you!!!
you are an amazing writer,your poems are deep and profound,and you hit the nail on the head.Thank you
thanx lost and 603 at least someone appreciates all the time and heart i put into these
me to im crying here they were brilliant...thankyou xx
I think they are fantastic.. and I think you should post one a day haha!!! Honestly they are fab and as I am on an emotional rollercoaster this evening, the first one made me shed a few tears!!
Marianne
im going home for the night ill read everyone comments tommorrow if anyone even bothers to comment, i spent hours on these poems id like to know people liked them or are inspired by them, also they are in my journal forever if you want to read them again