ADDICTION: SOCIAL COMMUNITY
Whats a good name for this poem? I need your help. I call it Reality.

Whats a good name for this poem? I need your help. I call it Reality.

i think i found myself today,
i didnt go far, just went astray.
i went down a path of pure delights,
i just spread my wings and took to flight,

i was blind you see, not to everything,
just what was in front of me.
all i wanted was not to feel,
reality had no appeal.

soaring high most everyday,
i began to see things in a different way.
no longer was i having fun,
clouds covered the sun.
hazey days to say the least,
i had befriended the beast.

i so longed for the life i once had,
i turned directions, went the other way.
the winds were strong, my wings were weak,
the more i flew, i made bounds and leaps.

the more i tryed, the harder it was,
until the day i grew strong.
so here i am in reality,
its where i found sobriety.



  


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great poem =)
you want name suggestions? hm...
maybe..

Full Circle?  

thats only thing i can think of right now. Im still on first cup of coffee here

anyways thanks for sharing your poem, its very good!
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I am not very good at titling someone elses stuff ..... but i really like yours, Carr - -
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ooo i like full circle..........thanks..xxxx
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