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uplifting poem i think..i wrote it...troubleinohio titled it..full circle

by carr, Jul 03, 2009 07:37PM
i think i found myself today,
i didnt go far, just went astray.
i went down a path of pure delights,
i just spread my wings and took to flight,

i was blind you see, not to everything,
just what was in front of me.
all i wanted was not to feel,
reality had no appeal.

soaring high most everyday,
i began to see things in a different way.
no longer was i having fun,
clouds covered the sun.
hazey days to say the least,
i had befriended the beast.

i so longed for the life i once had,
i turned directions, went the other way.
the winds were strong, my wings were weak,
the more i flew, i made bounds and leaps.

the more i tryed, the harder it was,
until the day i grew strong.
so here i am in reality,
its where i found sobriety.

Member Comments (3)

by carr, Jul 04, 2009 01:55AM
troubleinohio is a name of a person from this forum....lol

by allaboutmary, Jul 04, 2009 04:08AM
Great poem............and congrat's on your clean time. Keep up the great work.

by troubleinohio, Jul 04, 2009 06:32AM
LOL you didnt have to give me credit for helping suggest a title, but Im flattered! Your poem is very good! I wish I could write poems again. I havent wrote any since I was in my early 20's and they all suckked really really bad lol.
Do you write them regularly?

by tylersblueeyedmama, Jul 04, 2009 07:30AM
To: carr
Beautiful!!!!  I love it, it's so moving and inspirational!


Keep it up :)
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