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oxy
Mar 03, 2008 08:18PM
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u thought u knew me
u thought u had won
but look at me now oxy
ur days r done
i used to love to get high
snort u,sit back and let life fly by
nothing ever mattered as long as i had u by my side
but look at me now oxy
my eyes r pretty and clear
not like they used to be
full of doubt and tears
u used to scream "take me take me"
but i knew if i kept using u
my kids one day ,wouldn't wake me
ha ha oxy i won
u piece of ****
ur days r done
i cant write poems at all i was just sitting here thinking and this just kinda popped in my head...dont laugh u guys i know it sounds like a 4 yr old wrote it but it was me lol
u thought u had won
but look at me now oxy
ur days r done
i used to love to get high
snort u,sit back and let life fly by
nothing ever mattered as long as i had u by my side
but look at me now oxy
my eyes r pretty and clear
not like they used to be
full of doubt and tears
u used to scream "take me take me"
but i knew if i kept using u
my kids one day ,wouldn't wake me
ha ha oxy i won
u piece of ****
ur days r done
i cant write poems at all i was just sitting here thinking and this just kinda popped in my head...dont laugh u guys i know it sounds like a 4 yr old wrote it but it was me lol
you never give yourself enough credit. that was a very good poem. i never knew that side of you, haha. keep em coming. you know i love to bug you foxy, lmao a four year old, some of the things you say sometimes make me freaking laugh. i really did like that poem.
thanks gizmo..u always make me laugh to..u know i love ya.....
Your a poet and didn't know it!
LOVE the poem...definitely hits home,well most of it. Good job :)
That was awesome! I say everyone on here needs to write their own poem! That could be pretty interesting. Great job on the poem!
Pills, thrillz, on a daily i deal
With the stress and the pain
Of my addiction inflicten
Withdraws, doubt, low self estem,
Gotta pull myself out, still stuck in this position
I have 2 get past it, gotta finish my mission
Until then i continue my daily activities
Maintaining my life, i wish someone would listen please
Its a hard road ahead, i wish i could take it all back
But i cant, so i gotta learn from the things that i lack
i never write rhymz so excuse the sloppy track lol
With the stress and the pain
Of my addiction inflicten
Withdraws, doubt, low self estem,
Gotta pull myself out, still stuck in this position
I have 2 get past it, gotta finish my mission
Until then i continue my daily activities
Maintaining my life, i wish someone would listen please
Its a hard road ahead, i wish i could take it all back
But i cant, so i gotta learn from the things that i lack
i never write rhymz so excuse the sloppy track lol
OxyGirl,
I love your poem. It communicates and that's what it's all about. I commend you for your courage to quit. I hope it stays good for you.
I love your poem. It communicates and that's what it's all about. I commend you for your courage to quit. I hope it stays good for you.
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