Still bored and still tweeking the pic

[maybe368]

I don't see how to add a pic to the other thread, is there a way? Anyhoo, here is the new effort. It is optimized for internet, but I have the big version also. Let me know what you think...Mark

[orphanedhawk]

Ah, art.
One instructor told me painting was a series of corrections.

It's all in the process anyway, isn't it ??

[maybe368]

I was taught in an english class that the best way to write is to write it, then try to say the same thing in fewer words, kind of the same sentiment. I'll tweek on the first one, the second one seems a little sterile...Mark

[maybe368]

Es buena idea. I was thinking about using the pill background on the second one and trying something with the old syringes. I know one thing for sure, I need to get my life back...Mark

[orphanedhawk]

Si, yo comprendo. Yo hablo muy poco Espanol.

And my grammar is terrible.

You say this' is' a picture of. . . .because picture is singular.
The plural of ' is', is 'are.'  So these are pictures of 2016 capsules. . . .

Perhaps, you could simply leave off the pictured are or is part altogether ?

How about saying something like: My hep C treatment: 2016 caps, etc.?

[maybe368]

Really, you like the other one better? I know nothing about art. I am going to try something with the syringes. Se mas de gramaticas espanol, que igles, so it doesn't surprise me that I  butchered the language...Mark

[orphanedhawk]

I liked the other one better. I also liked your idea of making a border with syringes.

BTW: Grammatically I think it would be 'pictured here are 2016. . .  rather than is."

Keep working on it. You'll know when it's right.
What you could do is simply post it as a picture in your photos. Then you could let us know when there's a new one.