Again well thought out and well written , it is good to be able to write and put our thoughts down others may have some input also, you are obviously a deep thinker.
Again Thank-you and i hope they do
I liked your story. There are many people out there that suffer alone, no one to be their friend or that cares about them. We all have the capabilities to care about another person. When we suffer alone, we realize the value of one person that shows they care. I hope you are not alone anymore.
Cloud, you really are so sweet. And easy to like too. I don't know why people haven't reached out to you. I'm sorry to hear that. I like everything about you. You are a real nice guy and so talented as I have told you before..
Very well written story, kept my interest through out...You are not boring at all. I really like your personality a lot..
Me too..... hey you have some friends ....
lol well thank-you I'm trying to write a happier story but hard lol :D
keep trying doesnt have to be happy maybe something positive ...we are still very fortunate here .anyway A writer writes what he can so dont change yourself that would be fighting your thougts..all stories real or othwise , if the reader doesnt want to read it its their choice its your choice what you write ...