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662085 tn?1331345560

A Empty Room

O this place was perfect for so many but now it sit alone un used this empty room its cold and damp. The windows are cracked and one wont every open again. The door is sealed shut and no one ever gets in. A hole is on the wall that goes all the way though but its been seal on the other side. on the floor is a wet stain from a liouqied that set for far to long. the wall once held a nice blue color but now they hold nothing but a stained brown with small hints of blue. The floor cricks in a corner and a little drawing sits in the same corner.

This lonely room once held a secret love. A young man live in it and every night he would move a picture that once sat on the wall and talk to the young mistress on the other side. O there love was so kind so nice and the room held there secret so well. The father of the young mistress would warn the man to stay far from his daughter and would not let them eat together. But who can stop love, so one night the women quitely came over to the young mans room. The man pull a special bottle of wine out and after a few glasses he got on one knee she said yes of couse for her love for him was equal. They had no white wedding even though it was custom at the time to do so. Many years later after the father had passed and the couple returned to the house they gave the room to their son who was a young boy. IT stayed in his possesion till he was a man and then it move on to his son and the sons and daughters that came next. One boy was a strange who did things alone and enjoyed the room he even found a spot on the floor were the floor could be opened. He could fit in her and found it a great place to be alone. Under the floor the boy drew all over the place and made this place speical and years later he came back to see it one last time he died in the room soon after. He sister killed him in cold blood. So the room sat and sat and one day a young man who had ran away from the world came to the room. he found it to be magical and when he found the way under the floor this is were he took his girl to get his first kiss from her. The room once more held love in it. he painted a little drawing of hius girl near the place so other coujld find it and other did.

But now the room sits a empty room and no one will ever know its story. The walls tell of love, the floors story of pain and a new love, and the windows story of a how it protected a young girl from the most horrible of fates. Yes a fate worse then death. But you wont hear these stories for the room soon will be no more. Or perhaps this room is the room you live in now perhaps its been remodeled. Perhaps the windows fixed the wall replatered and the floor locked away. MAybe the room was broken down and reused for a new room and bits of pieces exist all over your home.

Maybe your story will be the rooms story

A empty room by cloudwindgate  
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662085 tn?1331345560
Yes i wrote it. It all came from me. I perfer not to give my name or not all of it atleast.

It needs work i really just wiped it up so i had something to show for this group. Not saying i didnt try and take some time. but there so much that could be done here i could go futher into each person story but this is short and sweet a small lesson lies here.
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535822 tn?1443976780
Thats very good It held me is this your story I see you say by 'you ..I enjoyed it thank you
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