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burn victim

Apr 13, 2014 - 3 comments

Been thru the ringer
yet somehow
im still wet

soaked with denial
from reining in my
so called
supremacy

laying in the sun
in no longer wet
now tanned with
knowledge

burn me if u wish
i seen that shooting star
it might not have  been
from this world
but it didnt seem  that far

theres a higher power out there
always looking in our eyes
shim knows the struggles
hence shim answers
2 our cries

if only i layed out sooner
and realized
lifes isnt handed 2 us
on a platter
its earned like a  
prize




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1742220 tn?1331356727
by meegWpaw, Apr 13, 2014
I guess this is a mixture of styles ... I like stanza four a lot ...

you have nice language in here.

meeg

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by dirtydirk, Apr 13, 2014
i might have a unorthdox style yes, but hopefully someday ill be more well rounded.....  i enjoy your insight again!!!!  real talk i aint gotta lie 2 kick it  !!!  so thx  :)

1742220 tn?1331356727
by meegWpaw, Apr 13, 2014
you crack me up dude.

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