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Melodious Love - New Poem.

Nov 14, 2009 - 8 comments

Don't be cruel. :P My entire heart goes into the poems I write, please don't steal them for your own selfish convenience. If you want to borrow one, ask, please. How would you like it if I borrowed your grandma, or your dog? You wouldn't. Kay, thaanksss.

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Melodious Love
-Danielle, 11/14/09


Today’s the day
This is it, I swear
My love for you
Is what you’ll hear

I snatch my guitar
And pluck a few strings
“That wasn’t it,” I smile
My heart’s jumping…

I take a deep breath
My fingers meet the thin brass
The small vibrations encourage
My fingers to dance

As I drift through the music
My eyes slowly close
Thoughts of you fill my mind
I hope my love shows…

The notes begin to soften
My sweet sound starts to fade
I peer up at you and beam
“Did you ever think I’d love you this way?”


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by Dazon50, Nov 14, 2009
Ahhhh...me thinks you captured some moments :-))))))

You know I am one of your avid poetry fans :-))))

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by Dazon50, Nov 14, 2009
I went to post this about 10 min or more ago and went out to the kitchen to eat something (late night snack), thinking it went out.  Got back in and saw the error message...lol.  I saw your note posted 34 min ago......I backed up in the tab that had the error message and my original post was still there.  This time it went through....:-))))  Better late than never

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by iwouldbdanielle, Nov 14, 2009
Mhmmm. :] And thankss. That makes me feel awfully special. lol

Yeah, better late than never! You're always the first I tell when I post a new one. :P

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by Dazon50, Nov 15, 2009
:0))))

It gets kind of hard to be in all places at the same time, huh?

I enjoy reading what you write.

Hugs,
d:-))))))

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by sunshine1976, Nov 15, 2009
You have such a talent. This really takes you in and makes you feel that moment.  Congrats on another great one and the courage to put it out there for all to see.

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by iwouldbdanielle, Nov 15, 2009
Donna - Yeah, it is. I'm always doing 7859327502 things at a time, so I definitely know how that is.

Sunshiiiiiiiiine - Thanks :D I'll keep on writing and postinggg.

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by sunshine1976, Nov 16, 2009
http://www.artandwriting.org/awards/howto

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by iwouldbdanielle, Nov 16, 2009
THANK YOU!!!

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