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Surprised
Angelic laughter, faintly, fills the air as the aroma of  fresh linen and irish creme play tug- of -war in my nostrals, tempting me into deep slumber and then slightly nudging me back into awareness.

shades of yellow and pink twirl around in my eyelids and then fade into the dark  like flower pedals that are free of there stems on a breezy spring dusk.

I stretch and moan like a Grizzly just awaking from hypernation as a familiar sound of sizzling and crackling come from down the hall.

My taste buds start to sweat in anticipation like the birth of Niagra falls. It intensifies into a flourishing river, unforgiving and unstoppable,Thus causing a voice in my head to yell sink or swim as i swing my uncooperative limbs towards the floor.

I stumble and weave like an old Drunk, through a maze of high heals, babydolls, and little hot wheels race cars then  glare back, unscaved and proud at my accomplishment like Indiana Jones or Bear Grills in the deadliest jungle on earth.

Standing in the Hallway, in my skippies like the undead with my super model pose but add 30 pounds. I hear a loud chear coming up the hall in parade form of all my family and friends.

Happy Birthday to you.


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1663430 tn?1306166463
I'm not sure what catagory my writing would fall under but it's fun. i just made that up.
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1649704 tn?1402782037
   You have a natural gift of poetry...very descriptive!
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1663430 tn?1306166463
the only part i wasn't happy with is the breezy, spring dusk. I phrased it a little funny there.
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1663430 tn?1306166463
But thank you. I use to write songs but i never tryed to do anything else.it gets my creative juices flowing.lol..
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1663430 tn?1306166463
I probably have a bunch of mispelling and mistakes in my layout so if there are any english teachers amongst you, i apologize. I'm just an old redneck having some fun.
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535822 tn?1443980380
hah well from one oldish former brit redneck...I like your style .,don't you think thats what creativity is the putting down of fine words ..that simply pop up in ones head ,the heck with spelling ..I like the descriptions.
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1663430 tn?1306166463
Well, thank you. I know that creative folks tend to be to critical on themselves so it's really nice to hear the complements. I will post more in the future and look foward to reading others.

Thank you, Friends.
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