Thank-you im glad to hear that. I hope i can meet those expectations with a more up lifting story.
Just so you know, I read them both. Looking forward to your next entry.
lol everyone wrote on the commented on the first part.
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not really lol ill see what i can pull out. Not all of them are this dark but a story needs conflict.
An interesting story that steps into the dark side. May we all have many lucid moments in which we are our "real self". good luck with your writing.
you are welcome I like your interesting style of writing have you any funny stories to tell us I would love that or anything out of the ordinary ....
Thank-you very much and i understand but thank-you for reading anyways
I like the way you write you are talented ,I am a person not given to ejoying negative stories but I dont mind reading if someone asks me to so it is perhaps not too enjoyable for me .