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TRAPPED (poem i wrote)
thought i would share this with all of you, I ve written several- thought this one others may relate too..

TRAPPED
It stared in the darkness

In the depths of the dark night
Upon the waking hours
It was not a pretty site.

My brain just couldn’t concentrate,
My hands would not be still
My pace was quickly slowed.
By all this pain I feel

My head feels like it being squeezed inside a big ol’ vice.
My neck feels like someone is trying to pin me down holding on oh so tight.
My hands tingle and so do my feet.
My eyes hurt, this is so absurd.
My face has pains I never felt before.

I walk with a gentle glide holding onto something so I don’t slide,
The tremors come without a warning; shaking and trembling I cant make it stop.
Scary to some, I feel ashamed.

I can not wrap my brain around what is being said.
I try to speak but,I can not make the words come out of my mouth

I feel so trapped I can’t get out, can someone please help me figure this out?
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sorry for the spelling errors i didnt notice them til now...like red green says "we're all in this together" lol
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Wow Lisa..well said !!!
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1281936 tn?1276560670
Thank you for sharing this. I can definitely relate!

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