I have written many a poem but none as deep as these. I bow to your excellent rendering of pain into words. They give an insight into you and also into those who can relate. Keep writing. It is a way of bringing everything you suffer into the light and gives you and others a chance to fight your demons face to face.
Cool poems. Keep up the good work!!!
ur very talented.. i love these poems..they r great.....<3 ang
Thank you... here's another one I did.. I'm shakey right now b/c I haven't written since I started percs, but now I am starting to feel creative again
I stood alone within the crowd
My mind dreaming in a cloud
Always wanting that escape
From my surreal and endless
Thoughts
Not really knowing where I'm going
With all these changes undergoing
And memories playing like a song
that just won't leave my mind
Always feeling so misplaced
Deep inside an endless space
While losing myself within the loss
Of who I thought I was
Learning nothing is for certain
The stage is dark behind curtain
I quickly try to change the scene
and walk back into light.
Awesome poem. You put my life on paper. I'm gonna print it and put it up to help me. Thank you for posting.
it is great that you were able to pour your pain in something so creative... you did something good from some really painful days, congrats
wow... I can tell I was WDing... lol mispelling things left & right :)