The Person I used to be

[RedFlame]

Hi everyone,  

I have been preparing for my first visit at the MS Specialty clinic at UofM.  I have written my story "the person I used to be" (or something like that) and just posted it in my journal.  If you have time and are interested could you please read it and tell me what you think.  

You know, too much, too jumpy, confusing stuff like that.

Thank you thank you,

Red

[RedFlame]

Thank you Audrey

[Audrey_M]

Red:

I added some comments today. Overall, very well done, just some comments on minor tweaking.

You have a gift for words and were able to convey a lot of information and emotion in a relatively brief and coherent manner. So many of us can relate to the overall situation, without knowing exactly what it is like to walk in your shoes, since each of us has different symptoms, impacts and life experiences.

Thank you for sharing.

Audrey

[RedFlame]

Thanks Red, I will go read what you wrote.    Red

[rendean]

I read it and it's good with just a few exceptions. I wrote my opinion under comments on the journal entry.

Good luck with the visit!

Ren